The top line of this blog are the theory and techniques guides for COMM 273. Along the left column you can see links to student work. Students post their public work here for COMM 273, Media and Popular Culture class at TLU.
Nice simple table that can easily be read. The only thing i can say for advice would probably be to be a little more descriptive and explain why these figures may seem to be drawn with the lines you say they were drawn with. Just a little more detail on why you chose them to be what they were. Other than that nice chart!
Very easy to read and comprehend. The only problem that I see is that the elaboration in the table isn't there. Why is it important that time/speed or line affects the overall reading of the comic? How does this play to the reader or audience? I would like to see more elaboration, but overall a very good table.
As Jesse said, this is nicely organized, but lacks real depth in examinations or explanations. Why do the numbers matter for the abstraction, what are they getting at? As far as your analysis goes, why do you think the figures and where they are has such an impact? What is there in the background that might also have an effect on this? What role does the time play, etc. etc. Just make sure to dig a little deeper into it all, you're mostly scratching the surface here.
This table is simple and easy to understand, but like everybody before me has mentioned; explain more and go more in depth. This should help when making your argument or connecting to your argument.
Nice simple table that can easily be read. The only thing i can say for advice would probably be to be a little more descriptive and explain why these figures may seem to be drawn with the lines you say they were drawn with. Just a little more detail on why you chose them to be what they were. Other than that nice chart!
ReplyDeleteVery easy to read and comprehend. The only problem that I see is that the elaboration in the table isn't there. Why is it important that time/speed or line affects the overall reading of the comic? How does this play to the reader or audience? I would like to see more elaboration, but overall a very good table.
ReplyDeleteAs Jesse said, this is nicely organized, but lacks real depth in examinations or explanations. Why do the numbers matter for the abstraction, what are they getting at? As far as your analysis goes, why do you think the figures and where they are has such an impact? What is there in the background that might also have an effect on this? What role does the time play, etc. etc. Just make sure to dig a little deeper into it all, you're mostly scratching the surface here.
ReplyDeleteThis table is simple and easy to understand, but like everybody before me has mentioned; explain more and go more in depth. This should help when making your argument or connecting to your argument.
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