The top line of this blog are the theory and techniques guides for COMM 273. Along the left column you can see links to student work. Students post their public work here for COMM 273, Media and Popular Culture class at TLU.
I like how you included the descriptions on the side of the page, and how you drew arrows to specify what you were talking about. I suggest however that you can go with a pen and outline certain areas of the characters to put a little more emphasis and show their lines of how they are drawn, and show how it affects there attitudes. But other than that, you did good analysis of what is going on.
I also agree with Orlando. One of the few concerns that I have is that some of the words are not legible because the color of the pen and the art clash together. One thing that you could argue in the last panel is that Lucifer has his back towards nothing. If I recall correctly, he references being the King of Nothing. Thus, he is turning his back to his self-proclaimed title "The King of Nothing".
I agree with Jesse, the words are not legible to us, but as long as you understand what you are writing it should be fine. In the end, you are going to be giving a speech, so your notes do not matter to us, just your content.
I like how you included the descriptions on the side of the page, and how you drew arrows to specify what you were talking about. I suggest however that you can go with a pen and outline certain areas of the characters to put a little more emphasis and show their lines of how they are drawn, and show how it affects there attitudes. But other than that, you did good analysis of what is going on.
ReplyDeleteI also agree with Orlando. One of the few concerns that I have is that some of the words are not legible because the color of the pen and the art clash together. One thing that you could argue in the last panel is that Lucifer has his back towards nothing. If I recall correctly, he references being the King of Nothing. Thus, he is turning his back to his self-proclaimed title "The King of Nothing".
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jesse, the words are not legible to us, but as long as you understand what you are writing it should be fine. In the end, you are going to be giving a speech, so your notes do not matter to us, just your content.
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