Thursday, September 3, 2015

Heartbreak Soup Notes

2 comments:

  1. IMO, you do a great job at describing everything, however, I think you can be more specific when explaining the lines of the panels. For instance, Panel 6 says "smooth and rounded" well what is this conveying. A calm, relaxed setting, a setting that is entitling love, etc. Overall though, nice job and also your format. Very easy to read.

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  2. I think your key and labeling were really good. everything is organized and I agree with what you say. I do agree with Trenton when saying you should explain the lines more and go in depth with what they mean.

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