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Tuesday, January 27, 2015
Page analysis
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comic data analysis,
Sandman

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I really like your numbering technique, it really helps with figuring out what is what. I like how you also described the lines and what they were, but i suggest just maybe going in detail on why you feel these lines are proud or strong? Maybe make a connection to the character and his actions in the panel? Otherwise good!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Orlando, what is the significance of the lines to the overall picture. Also notice the facial features of Dream in the last panel. See the crow's feet, the bags under his eyes, the look of delirium in his eyes and how that transitions into the next page? How can that be incorporated into your overall argument or elaboration of the text.
ReplyDeleteYou added some good detail in this, but I still feel like you could go deeper with it. The boys above touched on the lines, those are really important, but other than that, what do you notice about the color, or lack thereof? Or how there's only one panel that's really got color in it, and the others are all practically greyscale? What does that seem to signify, especially when coupled with the line he remembers from Lucifer? A little more nit-picking would serve you well, even with how blank this page seems.
ReplyDeleteEmily is correct. Your page lacks color, which is something not regularly seen throughout the series. Usually, vibrant colors are incorporated in all the pages, so touch more on why you think there is a lack of color. Have your own judgement without letting anyone else influence you. What do YOU interpret this as.
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