Panel
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Abstraction
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Transitions
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Time/Speed
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Line
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Words/Images
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1
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5 : The only visible face is blank due to how small her body
is drawn.
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1-2: scene to scene;
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Mia is walking slowly because she is upset from the way
Grace talked to her.
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The lines are thin and unfinished but they curve around Mia
to show her sadness.
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2- there is no words on the panel.
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2
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No faces in panel.
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2-3: scene to scene;
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The speed is unclear but it must be faster than the other panels
because it’s a space ship flying consistently.
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This panel is mostly dark with few lines but they are soft
and rounded.
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2- there is no words on the panel.
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3
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4: The faces all have very little detail and no shading.
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3-4: scene to scene;
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The class looks very bored in this panel which makes the
movement slow.
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The lines are stronger but not as completely defined and
gentle as the others.
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2- there is no words on the panel.
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4
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4: The faces are further back but still have more detail
then a 5
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4-5: scene to scene;
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This is faster because moving through hallways is
stressful and quick paced to get to class.
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The lines are gentle and defined.
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2- there is no words on the panel.
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5
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4: The faces are
still not overly detailed but all show upset faces on the characters.
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5-6: scene to scene;
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This movement is slightly faster because Cristine is
moving her head to the side.
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The lines are thicker and stronger here but are still
gentle.
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2- there is no words on the panel.
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I think a good thing to note is that Grace is in two of the panels which are 4 and 6. So when she is walking to class I think although it may seem fast but there is s good chance that Mia is just standing there just looking at here while she talks with some of her friends. Then moving to panel 5 it may seem like she is staring at the girl with the ponytail but when we move to panel 6 we see that she is staring at Grace. So, the speed may seem fast but what if it is not. I think moving on from here you can maybe your thesis con focus on the speed/time change when Grace comes into the scene, because to me I feel like there is a noticeable change
ReplyDelete-Brittany Ibarra
I think this is a really cool scene of the story I believe it is a fast but calm pace, focused on the journey in the spaceship. It appears to be a lower stake situation of the story compared to others in the story which are emotional and more melancholy. There is action in this scene though and this is a good analysis.
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